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The End of Your Pain
Contributed by
essentially9
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Monday, 10th January 2005 @ 08:26:17 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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The End of Your Pain
The life you led
Caused you to put a bullet in your head
It was all because of the strife you said
With the click of the trigger your fears were shed
The music still lives, even with you dead
Your words still echo in my mind
Your songs transcend through time
I am still trying to find
The reasons why
You gave it all up to die
Not wanting to live life
You gave it all away
With your future gone to waste
The cost to end your pain
You gave it all away
When you had every reason to stay
The cost to end your pain
With the click of the trigger your blood was shed
And your life came to an end
But your words still live within my head
Your words aren't restricted to be
Just a memory to me
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Re: The End of Your Pain
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by Pyrofungus on
Monday, 10th January 2005 @ 08:31:47 PM AEST
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Awesome write man! Yet we are selfish for wanting him to continue to be in pain just to hear more from him...i'm not saying that he did the right or the wrong thing...it is a personal subject that only he will ever know about and us as his loyal listeners should respect his choice....
please comment on my work too
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Re: The End of Your Pain
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by nail-to-the-head on
Monday, 10th January 2005 @ 08:37:56 PM AEST
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really good write! yet he sitll lives on with us all in his music.
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Re: The End of Your Pain
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by afterdark on
Monday, 10th January 2005 @ 09:10:43 PM AEST
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| See even though I really never cared for them that much..I liked how you brought alot to this poem..A good job Jennifer. |
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Re: The End of Your Pain
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by greeneyes on
Monday, 10th January 2005 @ 09:24:31 PM AEST
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Wow good writting.
Nancy |
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Re: The End of Your Pain
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by Vampirequeen on
Monday, 10th January 2005 @ 09:47:54 PM AEST
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| a nice tribute. |
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Re: The End of Your Pain
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by MorbidDeath on
Monday, 10th January 2005 @ 11:36:59 PM AEST
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loved this write he'll definately always live on in us its nice to know taht people arent letting his mark in life fade.
comment on my stuff if ya want to. |
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Re: The End of Your Pain
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by justjonesy on
Tuesday, 11th January 2005 @ 01:03:08 AM AEST
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| great write....kurts by far my fave.....if you really want to understand him and see deep into his writing pick up a book called kurt cobain:journals......i hate to see into his private life like that, but its just so interesting and eye opening |
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Re: The End of Your Pain
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by Bohemian_with_a_pen on
Tuesday, 11th January 2005 @ 05:14:22 AM AEST
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wow..... *speechless* this is amazing... Kurt Cobain is my god.... great tribute...
*bows* |
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Re: The End of Your Pain
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by pixie on
Tuesday, 11th January 2005 @ 06:16:11 AM AEST
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it was so sad what happened to Kurt Cobain, this was a sad and emotional write about him, a very powerful write
pixie xx |
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Re: The End of Your Pain
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by wray on
Tuesday, 11th January 2005 @ 07:36:09 AM AEST
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Aw good tribute. I know it wasn't your intention but the way you put "just a memory to me" on a new line seems to emphasise that despite what you say, his words ARE just a memory now -- gives that feeling of emptiness.
"The cost to end your pain" -- that's gonna stick with me for awhile. Well-put. |
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Re: The End of Your Pain
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 11th January 2005 @ 09:23:24 AM AEST
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It always seems a shame that poems like these get written. You wish he had never given you the chance....
Great tribute!!! |
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Re: The End of Your Pain
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by TaintedSoul on
Tuesday, 11th January 2005 @ 09:28:10 PM AEST
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Wonderful tribute to Cobain. Those who enjoyed his music in life have that music to remember him by. The music allows him to remain with his fans, more so than just the memories. Memories fade, music doesn't. And, that music will always inspire others as well.
peace
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Re: The End of Your Pain
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by PumpkinPie on
Tuesday, 11th January 2005 @ 11:30:38 PM AEST
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I was never a fan of Kurt Cobain but your write made me wonder more of the person he was and the life he led.You gave him a soul in your write,you wrote a lovely tribute to him.Written with perfection,
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Re: The End of Your Pain
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by Sinned on
Wednesday, 12th January 2005 @ 08:43:16 AM AEST
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Kurt Cobain
I will have to look up this man.Sorry I have never heard of him,but now am very interested.The tribuit is full of beautiful emotion and I felt the sadness of this man.
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Re: The End of Your Pain
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by imnohbdy on
Friday, 14th January 2005 @ 07:35:58 PM AEST
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| I know u get alot of it but Kurt is by far the greatest poet of our time. Furthermore I idolize the man for prsevering for as long as he did through the pain of his inner termoil. I only hope I can last longer through mine maybe see the end of that tunnel. Thats probably why his music speaks so deeply to me. Once again great subject as well as great writting has made this a fantastic poem. |
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