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MidKnight Terror
Contributed by
Sonibe
on
Wednesday, 4th December 2002 @ 01:30:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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In a village in the Shooting Stars Realm, there have been reports of a midnight massacre every other night. The guardians of that Realm have no idea how it happened, but it occurs every other night (litterally, one night, skip one, one night, skip one, etc.). The Emperor of the Realm, Tenku Torca, decided to go on a hunt to find this "Mass Killer", so he and 10 of his elite men guarded each house the best that they could. On the massacre night, Emperor Torca heard a deep death-like voice say, "MIDNIGHT." He ducked out of the way and an arrow with a note attached nearly hit his throat. The note read, "Midknight - a gentle breeze of terror that wipeth out a nation". When he looked up, he saw a human sized Dragon dive at him. He ran for his life and the Dragon followed shouting, "Midknight, MIDKNIGHT, ETERNAL MIDKNIGHT-TERROR, HAHAHAHAH!" Tenku stopped, turned around and nothing was there, but when he looked down, he began falling in his mind. The elite men looked at him shaking on the ground and one of them said, "What the heck is wrong with him?" Then his body stopped, and disappeared. The Elite men scattered far away and 5 of them went home in terror. The other 5 laughed at them and followed them to their homes. But when they entered the houses, all of them fell dead but 2. Their names were Toki and Kenshin. They were the last guardians of the Shooting Stars Realm. The next day, the Realm was overpopulated and Toki said, "What is going on here, I thought those people were dead!" then a boy walked behind him and said, "Fear thou not, for I brought them back...." then the boy's eyes turned white and he disappeared. Kenshin walked around to see if anyone could see him, then there was a rumble in the Realm and they both looked to their right and people's heads were being cut off, their legs broken, arms snapped in half from the wrist to the elbow, and their torsos being cut in half. Kenshin turned around and ran for his life and lost it. He took out his sword and tried to kill himself but he heard a death-like voice shout out, "IMMORTALITY" and the sword bounced off of his chest. The Sword became like rubber and wouldn't cut anything, so he looked for Toki and he was going through the same thing but he was tossed into the air and was never seen again....Kenshin's skin was slowly being peeled off and his blood kept flowing inside and outside. The boy created a portal and jumped into it and escaped the terror. The portal was dark and cold, then he heard the voice softly, "midknight terror eternally....eternal." the boy started shivering and running....
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Sonibe
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2002-12-04 13:30:00] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: MidKnight Terror
(User Rating: 1 ) by OreO on
Wednesday, 4th December 2002 @ 11:46:22 PM AEST (User
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This has alot of fantasy in it, it gave me the impression of a fantasy story more than anything, which is beautiful, i enjoyed reading this one alot...It has alot of immoral morbid pain in it...thanks for sharing this one..
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Re: MidKnight Terror
(User Rating: 1 ) by Sarah22 on
Friday, 6th December 2002 @ 11:05:17 PM AEST (User
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this poem is very
good keep
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Re: MidKnight Terror
(User Rating: 1 ) by adsalamon on
Wednesday, 18th December 2002 @ 08:56:26 AM AEST (User
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interesting |
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