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Bright Eyes
Contributed by
Pocket
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Monday, 10th January 2005 @ 07:56:08 PM in AEST
Topic:
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Wont let the fear drown me again
Wont let the speaking stares hit me
Can't find where I begin and end
Hear this, my solitary plea
Bright eyes, that's what they call me
But bright eyes, has a darkened soul
You don't know what these bright eyes see
Ten thousand tragedies they hold
Curled up in a lonely corner
Afraid of fear and this dismay
Only me a broken mourner
Tell my curse it cannot stay
Blind is my crying
Hopeful is my dying
False this denying
To the gates, to the hellish end
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Re: Bright Eyes
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 10th January 2005 @ 07:57:44 PM AEST
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"Bright eyes, that's what they call me
But bright eyes, has a darkened soul
You don't know what these bright eyes see
Ten thousand tragedies they hold"
...Wow...
Awesome write. |
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Re: Bright Eyes
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by pUnKa_RaCh on
Monday, 10th January 2005 @ 08:02:37 PM AEST
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| this was wicked! it took my breath away, very deep and sad. keep up the great poetry! |
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Re: Bright Eyes
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by Essentially9 on
Monday, 10th January 2005 @ 08:55:47 PM AEST
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| seems like everyone will see those gates these days. life and death arent as they seem though. |
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Re: Bright Eyes
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by twobabies on
Sunday, 31st July 2005 @ 08:33:54 PM AEST
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| great usage of words. very dramatic. i loved it. keep it up i'll be looking for more of your work. |
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Re: Bright Eyes
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by Sexygirl on
Sunday, 3rd October 2010 @ 03:01:24 PM AEST
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Well written..thanks for sharing this with us..
take care |
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