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My Death
Contributed by
LolitaMarionette
on
Monday, 10th January 2005 @ 06:04:05 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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Awake in the aloneness
that I call life
I could make it all end
with a knife
I sit in a dark corner
and carve words into my arm
all the pain
all this harm
its from my life
its from my past
it was all slow
and never fast
the pain sunk into my heart
never leaving
always hurt
forever grieving
the blood pours from me
I can feel lives pain
I was never okay
I was never sane
from my wrists
my life does come
I was never smart
forever dumb
well I shall mistake
no longer
I feel myself become weak
and never stronger
Copyright ©
LolitaMarionette
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2005-01-10 18:04:05]
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Re: My Death
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by Unheard_Mute on
Monday, 10th January 2005 @ 06:55:03 PM AEST
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| again, another great poem, but if you ever start up again... I don't know what I'd do |
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Re: My Death
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by jjones12 on
Monday, 10th January 2005 @ 07:49:12 PM AEST
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I've been there done that and it gets addicting! Great poem!
=Jen= |
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Re: My Death
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by killingmehslowly on
Friday, 14th January 2005 @ 06:54:50 PM AEST
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| this is a great poem. I know how that goes...and i really like the lines "I was never okay, I was never sane" They just stick in my mind. |
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