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Like a Bullet
Contributed by
skelington
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Monday, 10th January 2005 @ 05:30:06 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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Like a bullet ripping through my life
opening the gates to a river,
Washing away your green disguises
that seem to control my life
The goal seems to be
gaining everything for yourself.
But in the end you will have nothing...
but yourself.
I will tear everything about your
cold blackened way of life out of my heart.
Only then will I achieve satisfaction in my life.
YOU DON'T CONTROL MY ANYMORE!
Copyright ©
skelington
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2005-01-10 17:30:06]
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Re: Like a Bullet
(User Rating: 1 )
by afterdark on
Monday, 10th January 2005 @ 05:45:40 PM AEST
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| I'm thinking you should check your post b4 you post..And stay with the topic..You shift and it really looked like a big mess to read..I saw no anger no hate not a thing..So this gives no sort of reason,nothing to see you as someone who really wanted out..Write a better one. |
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Re: Like a Bullet
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by autumngreeneyes on
Monday, 10th January 2005 @ 07:31:08 PM AEST
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| I'm with afterdark for once..lol all I saw was blinding rage and not poetry.. I wanted to write a big ME to correct the post.. but that would be controlling too.. |
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