|
Menu
|
|
|
Social
|
|
|
|
Ever So Softly
Contributed by
poetryfreak
on
Monday, 10th January 2005 @ 05:03:22 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
|
It was taken away,
But ever so softly,
I'll never forget it,
Or how he didn't love me,
He knew all the words,
He had every line,
But when it was done,
I was yesterday's prize,
Did I know how it would end,
I probably just ignored it,
I wanted love so desperately,
All I got was resentment,
I should have refused,
At least he had fun,
Someone had to be hurt,
And I was the one.
Copyright ©
poetryfreak
... [
2005-01-10 17:03:22] (Date/Time posted on
site)
Advertisments:
|
|
|
|
|
Sorry, comments are no longer allowed for anonymous, please register for a free membership to access this feature and more
|
|
All comments are owned by the poster. Your Poetry
Dot Com is not responsible for the content of any
comment. That said, if you find an offensive comment, please
contact via the FeedBack Form with details, including poem title
etc.
|
|
|
Re: Ever So Softly
(User Rating: 1 ) by tractorbabe on
Monday, 10th January 2005 @ 05:20:16 PM AEST (User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
im sry for the hurt he caused you ...this is a very good poem though ....you are very talented...keep righting
tractorbabe |
|
|
Re: Ever So Softly
(User Rating: 1 ) by Daniels_Princess on
Monday, 10th January 2005 @ 05:26:45 PM AEST (User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
All I can say is wow..I can really relate to this. Im sorry for the pain youve been through, but youre not alone. You have talent, dont give up on that, because sometimes it can really get you through alot of dark, hurtful times. Keep writing. |
|
|
Re: Ever So Softly
(User Rating: 1 ) by O7NeVeS on
Tuesday, 11th January 2005 @ 03:12:25 AM AEST (User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
I'm so sorry wat had happened to you. I can most definitely relate unfortunately. Thank you for writing this poem and posting it, you definitely put most of my thoughts on paper!! keep it up...very nicely done! TD |
|
|
Re: Ever So Softly
(User Rating: 1 ) by OzChick on
Sunday, 11th December 2005 @ 08:29:57 AM AEST (User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
I've been there. Good write. Stay strong. |
|
|
|