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your there for me
Contributed by
tractorbabe
on
Monday, 10th January 2005 @ 04:54:15 PM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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triped above
the air i breath
your waiting there
and watching me
glancing down
with out a frown
after you saw
my world crash down
you stood there and watched
as i picked up my life
you held me back
as i picked up the knife
not letting me die
when times are rough
you held my soal
as i grew tough
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Re: your there for me
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by Daniels_Princess on
Monday, 10th January 2005 @ 05:21:42 PM AEST
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I really like this..
"Not letting me die
When times are rough"
This reminds me alot of me and the love of my life..he keeps me going..
Really good job |
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Re: your there for me
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by autumngreeneyes on
Monday, 10th January 2005 @ 05:22:56 PM AEST
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| good to have someone to hold you back.. good rhymes..it's just the spelling..needs a bit of work.. |
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Re: your there for me
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by PumpkinPie on
Tuesday, 11th January 2005 @ 11:39:02 PM AEST
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I liked the outcome of this piece,the fact that you made it through,you have a great person in your life,hold on to that person~
PumpkinPie |
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