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Metamorphosis Of The Soul
Contributed by
Daniels_Princess
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Monday, 10th January 2005 @ 03:55:19 PM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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I find myself lost in your thoughts
Word after word you speak
I hear no sound
But feel a million emotions
Freedom I find in you
I cant let go
Although with you Im falling
I find myself addicted
To this miracle drug
I cant make it on my own
Day by day you change me
My heart is growing cold
And trust Im losing
But still I find myself more attractive
Although more sarcastic
Slowly I slip away
From All sanity once known
Ive lost myself
Im soneone else
Ive become just like you
Copyright ©
Daniels_Princess
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2005-01-10 15:55:19]
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Re: Metamorphosis Of The Soul
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by afterdark on
Monday, 10th January 2005 @ 04:13:31 PM AEST
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| a very good post |
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Re: Metamorphosis Of The Soul
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by Daniels_Princess on
Monday, 10th January 2005 @ 04:37:42 PM AEST
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| Afterdark, thank you for the kind words. |
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Re: Metamorphosis Of The Soul
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by tractorbabe on
Monday, 10th January 2005 @ 04:56:42 PM AEST
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very good poem its like a story of life ..i like it
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Re: Metamorphosis Of The Soul
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by Daniels_Princess on
Monday, 10th January 2005 @ 05:12:21 PM AEST
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| Tractorbabe, thak you for your kind words and for your reply. Im very glad you liked it. |
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Re: Metamorphosis Of The Soul
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by autumngreeneyes on
Monday, 10th January 2005 @ 05:27:53 PM AEST
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| you need to learn independance again..or you'll get sucked up.. |
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Re: Metamorphosis Of The Soul
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 10th January 2005 @ 05:52:17 PM AEST
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| Interesting write. I liked it. Good job. |
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Re: Metamorphosis Of The Soul
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by Daniels_Princess on
Tuesday, 11th January 2005 @ 03:34:47 PM AEST
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| Thank you all for your replies. And, Im my old self again..sometimes when youre with someone, youll do anything just to keep them there..even changing yourself. But in the end..its not worth it. I have someone who loves me..for me now, and Im so much happier. |
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Re: Metamorphosis Of The Soul
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by Daniela_Maria_Violin on
Tuesday, 11th January 2005 @ 04:03:10 PM AEST
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Good write, and it's so true... you can so easily be sucked out of being yourself for someone else's benefit and your demise.
Love your screen name... :) |
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Re: Metamorphosis Of The Soul
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by Daniels_Princess on
Tuesday, 11th January 2005 @ 04:50:17 PM AEST
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| Daniela, thank you for the reply. Its like I said in a previous comment, sometimes you love someone so much you try to change just for them. When ultimately, if they dont love you for you..then they never loved you truly. And thanks for the comment on my screen name. It was very sweet of you. =) |
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Re: Metamorphosis Of The Soul
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by Spazzo on
Sunday, 27th February 2005 @ 11:08:41 PM AEST
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Very good poem. Always be yourself.
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