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for pascale
Contributed by
colette
on
Wednesday, 4th December 2002 @ 11:00:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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starless night
crouched on the fire escape
sodium lights
spilling into amber sky
romeo is sleeping
on the landing
the christmas lights
he keeps on
all year
have finally come
into season
power lines tether
the houses to the poles
totems in the
empty alley
evidence of conversations
above ground
she is sleeping
on her back
arms outstretched
a starfish
with the mind
of a
sage.
Copyright ©
colette
... [
2002-12-04 11:00:00] (Date/Time posted on
site)
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Re: for pascale
(User Rating: 1 ) by Ophelia on
Wednesday, 4th December 2002 @ 12:26:43 PM AEST (User
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You definitely have something here! I'm amazed at your unique writing style and imagination. Please keep writing for us all at YPDC. |
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Re: for pascale
(User Rating: 1 ) by OreO on
Wednesday, 4th December 2002 @ 11:32:20 PM AEST (User
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This is different, it has a style of it's own, i enjoyed this one alot....thanks for sharing it...
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Re: for pascale
(User Rating: 1 ) by Sarah22 on
Saturday, 14th December 2002 @ 03:35:55 PM AEST (User
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awesome poem |
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Re: for pascale
(User Rating: 1 ) by Ooniegirl on
Saturday, 14th December 2002 @ 05:21:35 PM AEST (User
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A beautiful tribute to a most beautiful child. I know where you are in this moment - that brief intermission in your life which allows you to contemplate, to cherish her and to connect with yourself. You scan the southern horizon, interrupted by other people's lives, and you dream of new lands. You are a brilliant, loving mother and friend and you inspire me. |
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