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secrets
Contributed by
Hannah_Heaven
on
Monday, 10th January 2005 @ 01:00:38 PM in AEST
Topic:
fantasy
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they budge up inside of your chest
you grow heavy and dark
all these secrets
whispering about
no-one knows your pain
the heart ache you keep each day
as the night dawns on you whisper inside
another secret to add
another weight to carry
the key never found
the door never shall open
just you and your secrets
alone at night
they cant hug you
or kiss you goodnight
dark and cold they freeze inside
your tears forgotton
your lover rotton
nobody left to whisper just one
your insides torn
the secrets worn
whisperers in the night
just one kiss...
please secrets...set my heart alight
Copyright ©
Hannah_Heaven
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2005-01-10 13:00:38]
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Re: secrets
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by pixie on
Monday, 10th January 2005 @ 01:01:46 PM AEST
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written well, very well, thansk for sharing
pixie xx |
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Re: secrets
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by AllSmiles on
Monday, 10th January 2005 @ 01:09:48 PM AEST
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| good poem. nicely done |
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Re: secrets
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by Rhymingron on
Monday, 10th January 2005 @ 01:22:08 PM AEST
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| Very goo |
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Re: secrets
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by afterdark on
Monday, 10th January 2005 @ 01:48:56 PM AEST
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| A very good post..I like the style you have. |
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