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Finding
Contributed by
slav_915
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Monday, 10th January 2005 @ 12:50:59 PM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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The mask of deceit is covered
Never finding its true self
I find I am trapped in the imaginary abyss
Trying to find a way out of the fake world the devil put me in
Death seems to be unstoppable
And the deceit of lies that your friends say
Cannot cover the breasts of the Hidden America
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slav_915
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2005-01-10 12:50:59]
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Re: Finding
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 10th January 2005 @ 01:05:20 PM AEST
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| I was fine with this until the last line. The line itself is interesting, but I am not sure of it's relationship to the rest of the poem. Maybe I'm just too muddled today to understand it? I hope you find your true self. Cheers! |
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Re: Finding
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by mina-1 on
Monday, 10th January 2005 @ 04:08:29 PM AEST
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i too did not understand ur last line and was wondering if u could clarify it?
hugs,
sue |
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