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Snakes & Ladders
Contributed by
pixie
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Monday, 10th January 2005 @ 12:20:23 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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Life is quite similar to this game,
They seem to be one in the same,
Life sometimes seems on your side,
It’s sometimes cruel & makes you want to hide.
Up the ladders happily you go,
Or down the snake when you lose your flow,
Life is never straight forward & simple,
It always seems to hold some kind of dimple.
Just when things are going your way,
You fall down as a snake comes out to play,
You can’t find any ladders to climb,
You can’t make heads or tails of life’s rhyme.
Round the corner awaits a surprise,
Something that will bring a tear to your eyes,
Life is hard & kicks you when you’re down,
Taunts you when no-one else is around.
Get up & try to fight against life’s muddles
Don’t be put off by the first little struggle,
Start as you so mean to go on,
When you fall try to continue singing your song.
Copyright ©
pixie
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2005-01-10 12:20:23]
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Re: Snakes & Ladders
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by ladyfawn on
Monday, 10th January 2005 @ 12:29:25 PM AEST
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very powerful and uplifting, beautifully written, great message:) hugs n' love nessa
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Re: Snakes & Ladders
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by Kratur on
Monday, 10th January 2005 @ 12:47:27 PM AEST
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definitely the way my life is going
*except for the last part
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Re: Snakes & Ladders
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by skyblumoon on
Monday, 10th January 2005 @ 12:51:23 PM AEST
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What a powerful and honest write. I really liked it.
Blu |
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Re: Snakes & Ladders
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by Fwog on
Monday, 10th January 2005 @ 01:01:23 PM AEST
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What a great idea and oh so true, avery good write which I so enjoyed.
Fwog |
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Re: Snakes & Ladders
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by OnAngelswings on
Monday, 10th January 2005 @ 01:10:56 PM AEST
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| Great write....we've all been there....enjoyed reading it...Shari |
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Re: Snakes & Ladders
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by Dawny on
Monday, 10th January 2005 @ 01:22:41 PM AEST
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I can relate to this!!
Great poem Pixie, really makes you think
Love Dawny xxx |
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Re: Snakes & Ladders
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by autumngreeneyes on
Monday, 10th January 2005 @ 01:49:06 PM AEST
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| yes..life kicks you when you're down and it's usually wearing big black spiked boots.. (sobs)..but I try to get up with my bloodied lips and sing..really I do.. |
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Re: Snakes & Ladders
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by Hannah_Heaven on
Monday, 10th January 2005 @ 02:29:58 PM AEST
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thats the way life is...like a wave lol you can be up or down...great way to explain it though opens your eyes!:D
brill write
love han xx |
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Re: Snakes & Ladders
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by the_Ghost_Moth on
Monday, 10th January 2005 @ 04:27:10 PM AEST
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You sure write alot.
I like your ideas,
and you were smart enough
to go with snakes and ladders
instead of chutes and ladders.
--Ghosty |
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Re: Snakes & Ladders
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by Jenni_K on
Tuesday, 11th January 2005 @ 04:55:23 AM AEST
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Excellent analogy, Pix.... good write
Hugs
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