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My Description of pure Love
Contributed by
Onangelswings
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Monday, 10th January 2005 @ 08:47:04 AM in AEST
Topic:
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Your beautiful eyes,
Are the mirror of your soul,
Within them, one can witness,
Pleasures untold.
Never have I known, a love so pure,
A broken heart I know,You're able to cure,
The lovely smile upon your face,
Like a miracle, could never be replaced.
The brightness caused by your lovely smile,
produces radiant happiness for miles,
Your ruby lips, like honey in taste,
Can imprison a woman's heart without any haste.
The angelic sound of your heavenly voice,
Will forever linger in my mind,
With all our love we rejoice,
That beautiful voice, never left behind.
As you can see,
from my memory of thee,
I describe what is to be,
Knowing forever, you will belong to me.
Copyright ©
Onangelswings
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2005-01-10 08:47:04]
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Re: My Description of pure Love
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by pixie on
Monday, 10th January 2005 @ 08:48:03 AM AEST
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made me smile to read this, its lovely,
pixie xx |
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Re: My Description of pure Love
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by afterdark on
Monday, 10th January 2005 @ 10:49:29 AM AEST
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| I wish I could say I agree with all u wrote,but I do not feel love is a feeling of always..You write a good poem still. |
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Re: My Description of pure Love
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by autumngreeneyes on
Monday, 10th January 2005 @ 12:22:43 PM AEST
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| The phrase "mirror of your soul" is used over much..other than that it was a decent poem. I'm not the mushy type..LOL and you're head over heels..so I shouldn't even comment.. when I'm head over heels, we can talk rotfl..:-) |
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Re: My Description of pure Love
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by Arsenic on
Monday, 10th January 2005 @ 02:46:57 PM AEST
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I found a very nice poem to read here. It is pleasant and uplifting, perhaps even hopeful after a fashion. This is a good change from the dark, dank, and dreary poetry that some of us are prone to spew forth from time to time. Thanks. Warm regards,
Arseni
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Re: My Description of pure Love
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by Kratur on
Monday, 10th January 2005 @ 03:10:14 PM AEST
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| sounds like the song of solomon, but from the lady's perspective... being that i have a different taste, but one cannot argue with taste when evaluating work, i'd say its good |
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Re: My Description of pure Love
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 11th January 2005 @ 01:08:32 PM AEST
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| Yes my love, until the end of eternity...........Mike |
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