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[x].when love hurts.[x]
Contributed by
prozac_memory
on
Monday, 10th January 2005 @ 08:39:49 AM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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When love hurts
And sheds of tears you want to keep
Leaves nothing but broken hearts
And memories you wont forget
When rose thorns cut deeply
And blood lines down your fingertips
Leaving bruised and broken hands
But still enough to put round your neck
When you ache inside
And your chest tightens always
So you grab a knife
And rip your own heart out
When you cry yourself to sleep
Lumps swelling up in your throat
And a night full of loveless nightmares
Or complete nothingness
When one cut is not sufficient
And arms are left shredded
Looks like someone’s been through a shredder
No one comes out pretty
When you know that when he holds that girls hand
You’ve lost him forever
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prozac_memory
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2005-01-10 08:39:49]
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Re: [x].when love hurts.[x]
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by pixie on
Monday, 10th January 2005 @ 08:41:27 AM AEST
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very sad write, your pain is stated clearly, an emotional poem, wrtten well
pixie xx |
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Re: [x].when love hurts.[x]
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by autumngreeneyes on
Monday, 10th January 2005 @ 10:08:01 AM AEST
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| you expressed your emotions..and I heard you. |
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Re: [x].when love hurts.[x]
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by afterdark on
Monday, 10th January 2005 @ 11:01:05 AM AEST
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| The only thing one can count on is the loss of love. |
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Re: [x].when love hurts.[x]
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by hdngfrmthelight on
Monday, 10th January 2005 @ 03:19:45 PM AEST
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| Excellent. Brought tears to my eyes. |
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