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Loose Jeans Bare Feet
Contributed by
bohemian_with_a_pen
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Monday, 10th January 2005 @ 07:51:33 AM in AEST
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about our friend who went out with a guy who used to get black outs and beat her, they both turned to drugs as an escape
She flicks her hair as she walks down the street,
doesn't care if they care, loose jeans and bare feet,
Bags under her eyes from late nights spent awake,
shaky hands and red eyes from the drugs that she'd take,
So what's under the powder, compact, maybelline,
Back before he had found her,
won't say where she'd been,
Those nights spent downtown still a blurry haze,
In fights all around, woke up still in a haze,
The bruises he gave her, black, purple, blue,
Because his anger comes in waves there's nothing she can do
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Re: Loose Jeans Bare Feet
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by declinefoale on
Monday, 10th January 2005 @ 10:48:12 AM AEST
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| Really good, simple and really compelling. |
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Re: Loose Jeans Bare Feet
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by ladyfawn on
Monday, 10th January 2005 @ 02:09:38 PM AEST
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so sad, i hope she finds a way through this.. p.s. tell your friend who wrote this; she has a beautiful talent:) hugs n' love nessa
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Re: Loose Jeans Bare Feet
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by waos on
Tuesday, 8th February 2005 @ 11:03:31 PM AEST
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Thats a really good poem. Thats a really sad story too.
~Waos/Kara |
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Re: Loose Jeans Bare Feet
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by emystar on
Sunday, 27th February 2005 @ 05:13:13 AM AEST
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yeah what nessa said.
a masterpeice as I've neva been phycically abused but once but I know emotional abuse so well.
thank your friend for sharing this as I'm sure your friend knows that others will learn from her pain.
luv, huggs, big smiles,
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Re: Loose Jeans Bare Feet
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by Deleterious_Dislike on
Monday, 14th March 2005 @ 04:18:05 AM AEST
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This is quite good.
I liked the ending.
It's not as deep as Im in the mood for though =) |
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Re: Loose Jeans Bare Feet
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by freckle on
Saturday, 16th April 2005 @ 10:57:34 PM AEST
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Good poem. Simple yet sad and one to make you empathetic to the girl. Nice job.
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Re: Loose Jeans Bare Feet
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by Man_On_High on
Friday, 5th August 2005 @ 09:32:22 PM AEST
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What a tragedy..
I hope all is well with your friend these days.
Though incredibly sad, it was well written.. this write.
Billy |
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Re: Loose Jeans Bare Feet
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by Sirena_Degana on
Monday, 19th September 2005 @ 12:51:30 PM AEST
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| fantastic |
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