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Comfort Me
Contributed by
StoneAngel666
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Monday, 10th January 2005 @ 07:42:46 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Does he say these same words to other girls?
Who knows, who to tell, Do I trust this Mystery Guy
I am talking to?
Or does he really mean them?
Thoughts roaming through my head, and can't get them out
Wanting so bad to believe him but afraid of getting hurt
What should I do
Do I take another chance of getting hurt
Do I flee to safety
What should I do, What should I do
Please say comforting words to me
For I am very afraid
Please say yes you mean them
For I already have fallen for you
I miss you already, and I do mean the words I am saying
So Mystery Guy please
Hold me close and comfort me
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StoneAngel666
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2005-01-10 07:42:46]
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Re: Comfort Me
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by afterdark on
Monday, 10th January 2005 @ 07:44:40 AM AEST
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| Heartfelt and strong write. |
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Re: Comfort Me
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by Summerwine on
Monday, 10th January 2005 @ 10:55:23 AM AEST
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| I loved the content of your poem, but i thought it didn't flow smoothly, and in that way it made it harder to follow.... but i still felt what you were saying...Yvonne |
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