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My World

Contributed by Neil on Monday, 10th January 2005 @ 07:25:56 AM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry

I breathe in deep the scent of your skin
My senses go crazy and I’m lost within
This little world I’ve created around
The two of us--then without a sound

You move away out of my grasp
A tube of lipstick in your clasp
You touch it gently to your lips
I drink you in, in little sips

You stand and turn and give me a look
You know my thoughts just like a book
You beckon to me with a longing gaze
I’m trying to move but I’m in a daze

You move in close and take my hand
The dinner tonight that I had planned
Is tossed aside like my shirt on the floor
What you have in mind is so much more

You pull me close, I know what you want
I try to pull back just to give you a taunt
But there’s no holding out, I know this by now
I’m yours and you know it, I just don’t know how

I could ever have gotten a woman like you
Such grace and beauty, a heart that’s true
To love such a man as I think I am
You can see more in me than I know I can

So I give in to you with love unrestrained
And all my devotion without refrain
In my little world, you’re the best part
In my little world, you have my heart.

Copyright Â© Neil ... [ 2005-01-10 07:25:56]
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Re: My World (User Rating: 1 )
by Scarlett on Monday, 10th January 2005 @ 10:10:40 AM AEST
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that was lovely, real emotion in your words. who ever it's about is very lucky to have someone so passionate.

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