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Open-Hearted

Contributed by Tamara on Monday, 10th January 2005 @ 07:07:59 AM in AEST
Topic: LostLove

He is the one I am sad about. I've lost him- lost the only one I ever loved, lost the only one that ever truly loved me for what was under the mask I wore every day. I don't know how he could slip through my fingers without me feeling it. One minute he was there... then the next time I looked- he was gone. I can still feel him with me- even if it is only metaphorically. He had me with everything he did- his walk-his talk- his smile. I can still see him smiling with my mind's eye. I can still smell him near me and I can still hear the ringing of his melodic voice. Love is a strange and wonderous thing. One moment you are so so in love with one another and the next he tells you it's over. How can anyone describe that feeling to someone who's never been in love? or never experienced loss? I loved and still love him with every fibre of my being and yet he offers no explanation, no reason of why, only that he will never stop loving me, but things can not go on the way they are. Why? WHY NOT? He sure had me fooled. I laid my heart out on the table for him, my walls were down and and I felt safe with him, but I guess everybody hurts some time. I trusted to quickly. I should have waited. I had to learn the hard way- although I don't regret a thing other than believing every word he told me- why wouldn't you believe the words of the one you love? But I do love him unconditionally. I can never turn on him. I couldn't. I love him. He has caused love sores all over my body. . . inside and out. . . how do I get over that? I don't know how to not love him- open-heartedly- completely. I guess I will learn to live without him in time, but it will take a lifetime to be over him

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Re: Open-Hearted (User Rating: 1 )
by prozac_memory on Monday, 10th January 2005 @ 08:46:56 AM AEST
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i loved reading this, beautiful but sad write.
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