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where do broken hearts go?
Contributed by
mina-1
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Monday, 10th January 2005 @ 06:59:45 AM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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Where do broken hearts go?
Do they have a home?
Who will come to mend this heart
That you sadly broke apart?
I'm shattered to pieces
My heads a mess
The loneliness is making me sad
The pain is tormenting and i feel mad
I loved you, I let you
Then you said good-bye
I'm like a toy you played with
Then you tossed me aside
I loved you with all my heart
Now the pain is tearing me apart
Where will i go? Or what will i do?
My heart will never get over
The hurt you put me through
It'll take time, but my heart will slowly heal
Releasing all the anger and the frustration i feel
I'll eventually move on a road without you
Maybe then you'll realise the painful truth
Will she love you like the way i Loved you?
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mina-1
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2005-01-10 06:59:45]
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Re: where do broken hearts go?
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by TaintedSoul on
Monday, 10th January 2005 @ 07:13:21 AM AEST
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A broken heart seems to be held in place by overwhelmingly heavy chains that bind us to the one who broke it. Sooner or later though, those hearts break free of their bonds and their wings unfurl once more. Well written.
peace
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Re: where do broken hearts go?
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by pixie on
Monday, 10th January 2005 @ 07:27:57 AM AEST
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very good writem, really liked this one, such feeling and emotions
pixie xx |
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Re: where do broken hearts go?
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by declinefoale on
Monday, 10th January 2005 @ 10:52:06 AM AEST
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| touches a lot of different emotions, i really liked it felt like you were speaking for a lot of people |
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Re: where do broken hearts go?
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by jmpy84 on
Tuesday, 11th January 2005 @ 09:24:03 PM AEST
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| anthother great write had great emotion |
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Re: where do broken hearts go?
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by kidpoet_213 on
Sunday, 27th February 2005 @ 11:17:36 PM AEST
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Sue...
This is a very good write. I like it... it's very heartfelt. U've got a talent too! Take care.
~Donna~ |
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