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Welcome
Contributed by
cryingonmyporch
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Wednesday, 4th December 2002 @ 08:00:00 AM in AEST
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Welcome to my World,
won't you come on in?
What may you find inside?
Inside you'll find my heart.
My heart which is broken apart.
Inside you'll find my life.
A life filled with remorse.
Inside you'll find my hope which grew feeble.
But inside the one thing you may not find is!
My mind which I've lost so many times.
I lost it when my heart was broken.
I lost it when remorse filled my life!
I lost it when my hope grew weak.
I lost it so many times I forget it in time.
So day after day I think and say to myself!
Was it left when my love left me!
Was it left when the rain began!
Was it left carelessly at the store.
Or did I just ignore it and leave it next door!
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2002-12-04 08:00:00]
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Re: Welcome
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by LOWMAN613 on
Wednesday, 4th December 2002 @ 12:58:26 PM AEST
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| I hope you;ll find it in heart some day all those things you lost! Great words! Christina |
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Re: Welcome
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by OreO on
Wednesday, 4th December 2002 @ 11:12:16 PM AEST
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I agree i hope you find all that you've have lost one day....this has a style of it's own, it's unique...thanks for sharing this one...
.:*~*:.OreO.:*~*:. |
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Re: Welcome
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by LJ on
Thursday, 5th December 2002 @ 12:33:03 AM AEST
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| This is a good write. Your mind knows its way home, sometimes it just needs a little coaxing! You will heal and grow strong again. It takes time. Well done! |
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Re: Welcome
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by nightrider on
Friday, 6th December 2002 @ 04:10:02 PM AEST
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| hey amy, this is a great write! thanks for recommending it to me. this makes alot of sense to me, and i often feel the same way. thanks! |
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Re: Welcome
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by TheVoice on
Tuesday, 24th December 2002 @ 07:07:15 AM AEST
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Amy,
Thank You for welcoming me into your world. You need not worry about your mind being lost. It is in the hands of the Lord and my hands are on his. You are cared for greatly. I continue my prayer watch for you daily.
NEVER give up hope.
God's Love and Mine.
Bruce
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