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DESIRE
Contributed by
sweetangeluk
on
Monday, 10th January 2005 @ 06:39:38 AM in AEST
Topic:
DreamsandWishes
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Desire ignites her heart in flight
Pleasures to savour lustful delight
Clothed in a rainbow of many hues
May heaven touch your soul choose....
....Your Fantasy explore Pandora's box
Taste forbidden fruit passion unlock
Hope guides the darkness forever
Taunting you till the twelfth of never
Beautiful and vibrant sweet desire
Secret words that whisper on fire
Intensity enflames down on your knees
Taste her fragrant nectar as you tease
Goddess of fantasy erotic attraction
Hungry for love craving satisfaction
Let carnal love flow with potential
Fulfilling your dreams essential
Love Angelxxxx
Copyright ©
sweetangeluk
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2005-01-10 06:39:38]
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Re: DESIRE
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by mina-1 on
Monday, 10th January 2005 @ 07:10:33 AM AEST
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i throughly enjoyed ur poem.
well written
desire can be a dangerous thing sometimes, especially when u desire something that u can't have.
cheers,
sue |
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Re: DESIRE
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by pixie on
Monday, 10th January 2005 @ 07:28:28 AM AEST
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brilliant write about desires, great work
pixie xx |
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Re: DESIRE
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by ladyfawn on
Monday, 10th January 2005 @ 11:43:28 AM AEST
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passionate and classy, a beautiful poem! hugs n' love nessa
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Re: DESIRE
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by FleurdeSang on
Monday, 10th January 2005 @ 02:51:29 PM AEST
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Mon ange douce et doué, your titles do not prepare us for the beauty and enchantment that your writing possesses!! Flawless!! I love this piece, and relate to it so well! My friend, your talent blinds us in this piece... what am I saying? In every piece!! MARVELOUS! Thanks so much for always sharing your wonderful emotions and tales to us, your fervent fans! Much love! Forever,
Fleur de Sang *Stephy* |
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Re: DESIRE
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by emystar on
Monday, 24th January 2005 @ 11:45:11 PM AEST
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Awesome!
huggs,
emy |
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Re: DESIRE
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by Jenni_K on
Monday, 14th March 2005 @ 05:16:29 PM AEST
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Wow!! What a passionate write!!!
Simply beautiful..and tastefully written
Hugs
Jenni |
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Re: DESIRE
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 18th March 2005 @ 01:23:45 PM AEST
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Desire is the most apt title for this piece...
Wonderful.
Johnny. |
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Re: DESIRE
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by SimplyMe on
Friday, 25th March 2005 @ 01:32:48 AM AEST
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*Sigh* I fear i am a victim of Desire right now. Lol everybody tends to fall into it's grasp. You just describe it so well. Wonderful write.
~Alucia~
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Re: DESIRE
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by hauntedscorp on
Monday, 25th July 2005 @ 05:53:22 PM AEST
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Wow Angel!! Hotter than the weather here today; )
Love your expression in this write...the first two lines really set the tone. Very lusty and sexy write, yet done in a tasteful manner...
Scorp. |
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