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4 Poster Bedrooms
Contributed by
classicfailedhero
on
Monday, 10th January 2005 @ 05:42:01 AM in AEST
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Mute, longing, devoid of contact,
A heaven lacking in suprises.
Beauty crusted over the girl,
Like long forgotten excretements.
Rivets and dents make noise,
Stroked by fine fragility.
Coarse, black circles & neon lights.
Mellow, prolonged flashes of content,
Visible in hunched shoulders.
Background of inaudible beauty & forced love,
Does it know it breaks a heart with a whimper?
Eyes like dry, burning autumn leaves.
Liquids stew in his belly,
Creating nostalgia of people & places we've never even seen.
Apolagetic smiles reflected off every selfish move,
Violation.
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2005-01-10 05:42:01]
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Re: 4 Poster Bedrooms
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by declinefoale on
Monday, 10th January 2005 @ 10:55:19 AM AEST
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| I myslef have been on a bus trip about that long and I really get where your coming from with this really well written (also a poem not about heartbreak, woohoo!!) |
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Re: 4 Poster Bedrooms
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by Silent-No-More on
Saturday, 15th January 2005 @ 12:30:09 AM AEST
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I came here after reading your Limos. I do very much like your style... it has a Beat poetry feel to it - but not exactly. This is the type of write that I could sink my teeth into - that is worthy of discussion/consideration.
Very well done - again. Please keep posting.
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