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LOOK WHAT YOU DO TO ME
Contributed by
enusynts_assystynt
on
Monday, 10th January 2005 @ 04:42:37 AM in AEST
Topic:
Grief
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You don't love me,
don't miss me.
You don't hold me,
don't kiss me.
I try and try,
you lie and lie.
I just want to be happy,
you just want to slap me.
I just don't know what to do anymore,
all you want me for is a whore.
So, I'm leaving,
cheast heaving.
Tears in my eye,
why oh why?
I let you get to me,
now I have to set me free.
I will really miss you,
and realy want to kiss you.
But, I am strong,
that's why I'm moving along.
Stay on the grind,
you'll stay on my mind.
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enusynts_assystynt
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2005-01-10 04:42:37] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: LOOK WHAT YOU DO TO ME
(User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on
Monday, 10th January 2005 @ 04:49:02 AM AEST (User
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Such a painful yet beautiful poem you have written..... Welcome to YPDC..... Terrific poem, and I hope you will post more. |
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Re: LOOK WHAT YOU DO TO ME
(User Rating: 1 ) by Rhymingron on
Monday, 10th January 2005 @ 05:57:36 AM AEST (User
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Very well done. |
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Re: LOOK WHAT YOU DO TO ME
(User Rating: 1 ) by blowfish_jane on
Monday, 10th January 2005 @ 06:07:22 AM AEST (User
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Such a sad poem, but hopefully finality is on its way. Good write.
Hugs,
Jane x |
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Re: LOOK WHAT YOU DO TO ME
(User Rating: 1 ) by pixie on
Monday, 10th January 2005 @ 07:30:12 AM AEST (User
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a very emotional and sad write,*hugs*
pixie xx
welcome to YPDC |
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