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Luck of the Draw
Contributed by
curtisc
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Monday, 10th January 2005 @ 02:18:58 AM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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Life can be so hard somtimes,
and you don't know which way to turn.
Just remember those good times,
there's absolutely no cause for concern.
We all have those days where nothing goes our way,
and of course, life goes on.
You may be confused and in disarray,
but yet another day starts at dawn.
Life can only get better from here,
why would you let it get worse?
I know the future's unclear,
it's too bad life doesn't have reverse.
Life can present you with many surprises,
most of which you never expect.
Sometimes you have to make compromises,
and wait for things to take effect.
Life really isn't all that hard,
all you have to do is follow your heart.
You might not have gotten the best card,
but it's yours from the start.
Copyright ©
curtisc
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2005-01-10 02:18:58] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Luck of the Draw
(User Rating: 1 ) by afterdark on
Monday, 10th January 2005 @ 11:35:16 AM AEST (User
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Way to much fluff in here.. |
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Re: Luck of the Draw
(User Rating: 1 ) by O7NeVeS on
Thursday, 13th January 2005 @ 03:36:09 AM AEST (User
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Fluff or not I thought it was Great! I like how you put this one together and def. loved the flow. You touched upon a lot of truth in life. TD |
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