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~Your Invisible!~
Contributed by
pUnKa_RaCh
on
Monday, 10th January 2005 @ 12:04:20 AM in AEST
Topic:
AngryPoetry
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i wish i could see you one last time
i wouldnt give you a loving stare
you'd get a disgusted look from me,
i wanna show you i dont care!
even though you;re moving far away
and i may never see you again
i wouldnt lower myself as to give you a hello
not after all this pain
im sick of being the nice girl
why should i when you made me feel so blue?
if i had the pleasure and the chance
id say "mate **** you too!"
i swear to God as my witness
id look away from your deceitful eyes
make sure i looked to the ground
turning my back against your face of lies.
of me this will be your last memory
the last time you walk past me
you did this to yourself!
why should i acknowledge you? now you see
boy i would ****in love it!
if i could ignore you one last time
it is so good to feel
revenge thats rightly mine
i wanna pretend you are invisble
like i was invisible to YOU
make u ****in bleed and hurt
for all the crap you put me through!
oh it would be so sweet
pretending you werent there
i know it will hurt you heaps
i hope you cannot bear
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pUnKa_RaCh
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2005-01-10 00:04:20]
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Re: ~Your Invisible!~
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by ladyfawn on
Monday, 10th January 2005 @ 12:31:42 AM AEST
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great venting, but hold your head high, the best 'revenge' is living well and happy:) hugs n' love nessa
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Re: ~Your Invisible!~
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by Dragontear27 on
Monday, 10th January 2005 @ 12:51:13 AM AEST
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| Nicely done, i can relate to this poem as you do. But you can't let the grudge of a person control you, or you'll turn bitter from that hate you hold for them. Again nicely done. ~~lates~~ |
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Re: ~Your Invisible!~
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by Bridget_theMidget_Powerz on
Monday, 10th January 2005 @ 04:00:01 AM AEST
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| YEAH! You tell him! |
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Re: ~Your Invisible!~
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by blowfish_jane on
Monday, 10th January 2005 @ 06:27:55 AM AEST
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a very hurtful poem, i like the way you vented on your poem. cool write.
Hugs,
Jane x |
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