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ANOTHER DAY
Contributed by
Lost_Boy
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Sunday, 9th January 2005 @ 10:49:39 PM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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It was just yesterday
we sat down and we began to play
at the blink of an eye
he was gone,
all i can wonder is why
why couldn't he stay
Everynight i cry to sleep
was it really ment to be this way
its hard to go on to the other day
my heart had been shattered to pieces
picked up and thrown away
If only it was possible to go back in time
how could he missed out on all the sign
the sign god been sending to him
WRONG WAY
Now he's lock up in a cage
i only can pray to god
that he will let my brother
make it through another day
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Lost_Boy
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2005-01-09 22:49:39]
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Re: ANOTHER DAY
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by Kalika on
Monday, 10th January 2005 @ 12:16:10 AM AEST
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Absolutly beautiful, I hope God answers your prayers today and everyday.
Kali |
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Re: ANOTHER DAY
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by pUnKa_RaCh on
Monday, 10th January 2005 @ 12:21:26 AM AEST
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| wow, this is really sad and i love the start, its brilliant...............very moving write...u can tell u really care about ur brother. great poem |
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Re: ANOTHER DAY
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 10th January 2005 @ 12:23:01 AM AEST
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Such a sad but great write.
I wish you and your brother the best of luck. |
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