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If You Are Only Weakness
Contributed by
weepingprophet
on
Sunday, 9th January 2005 @ 09:54:52 PM in AEST
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Your arms
once strong and brave
you were after all
my hero
now i look at you
and all i see
is the betrayal
your weakness
you can't even hold your head
you stumble every time you move
and falling is simply ordinary
what happened to the way
the way you lifted me up
you held me tight
then you let me go
now falling doesn't mean rising
and rising is too far out of sight
all you see
with your blind eyes
are the tears that you painted in mine
i will never cry for you
you and your weakness
every lie you said
was never true
you and all your weakness
where do dreams come true
if you are only weakness
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2005-01-09 21:54:52]
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Re: If You Are Only Weakness
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 9th January 2005 @ 10:22:32 PM AEST
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| Guess this is what happens in some relationships when they fall apart. Nice emotional write! Cheers! |
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Re: If You Are Only Weakness
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by pUnKa_RaCh on
Monday, 10th January 2005 @ 12:33:33 AM AEST
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| wow, i like this poem a lot i really do, its powerful, emotional and empowering. well done and i can relate too...i like it. |
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