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Southern July Evening
Contributed by
Lee
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Sunday, 9th January 2005 @ 09:48:10 PM in AEST
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Timid rain
Falls down on me
Like a blessing in disguise
And I don't know why
But my heart is in the sky
Of a Southern July
Evening
It's peaceful and it's calm
Catch a raindrop in my palm
Maybe this is all
Maybe it's so small
But maybe
This is all
All you need
People in their cars
Passin' me by the roadside
I'm not tryin' to figure out the world
I just want to keep you all in mind
And some people are surely thinking
That I'd better get inside
But I'm out here 'cause my heart
Is in the sky
Of a Southern July
Evening
Wind wraps around me
And the sky
It does surround me
Way up there
Copyright ©
Lee
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2005-01-09 21:48:10]
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Re: Southern July Evening
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 9th January 2005 @ 10:34:56 PM AEST
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| This is very nice and portrays hopefulness. I rather like it. Cheers! |
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Re: Southern July Evening
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by Bob18Dylan on
Tuesday, 19th April 2005 @ 12:45:53 PM AEST
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This is a gerat poem. I like the lines
And some people are surely thinking
That I'd better get inside
But I'm out here 'cause my heart
Is in the sky
Of a Southern July
Evening
This is great . Keep it up! |
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Re: Southern July Evening
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by Anne-ish on
Wednesday, 27th April 2005 @ 10:13:07 PM AEST
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| You're so good! 1 of the best poems I've read in my life, and, no, I'm not some illiterate nut. OK - what was good? The title was drawing... I've read another poem of yours and you have a way of making each part better than the last. "My heart is in the sky" - Mine is now :) Review one of mine! |
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