|
 Menu
|
|
|
|
|
Social
|
|
|
|
|
love is a friendship set on fire
Contributed by
TheRaven
on
Sunday, 9th January 2005 @ 07:16:18 PM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
|
The heart is scared
To confess, afraid of revealing
A cut that only needs
Healing. Side by side,
But so far apart, longing
To talk, to share it's overwhelming
Feelings. The heart is scared
To touch, frightened of the
Simplistic beauty that can
Pierce so deeply,
Tattooing the darkened soul
With a red charm.
Intoxicating, lustful,
It weaves a trail of light
Through the shadowed tunnels,
Finally reaching that which
Needs to be held most-
Me.
-The Raven-
Copyright ©
TheRaven
... [
2005-01-09 19:16:18]
(Date/Time posted on
site)
Advertisments:
|
|
|
|
|
|
Sorry, comments are no longer allowed for anonymous, please register for a free membership to access this feature and more
|
|
All comments are owned by the poster. Your Poetry
Dot Com is not responsible for the content of any
comment.
That said, if you find an offensive comment, please
contact via the FeedBack Form with details, including poem title
etc.
|
|
|
Re: love is a friendship set on fire
(User Rating: 1 )
by afterdark on
Sunday, 9th January 2005 @ 07:18:17 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
| If you are down.At least you are still able to feel..Worry when you no longer can. |
|
|
Re: love is a friendship set on fire
(User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on
Sunday, 9th January 2005 @ 07:20:49 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
| I like the way this winds down to the final "Me." 'Tattooing the darkened soul With a red charm." is my favorite line here. Cheers! |
|
|
Re: love is a friendship set on fire
(User Rating: 1 )
by autumngreeneyes on
Sunday, 9th January 2005 @ 09:05:06 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
The heart is scared
To confess, afraid of revealing
A cut that only needs
Healing. Side by side,
The heart is scared
To confess, afraid of revealing
A cut that only needs healing.
Side by side,
|
|
|
|
· 
Poetry
Community
Members
Areas
Reference
Search
Top
Others
