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Goodbye
Contributed by
TheRaven
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Sunday, 9th January 2005 @ 07:10:11 PM in AEST
Topic:
goodbyepoetry
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Sprawled on the floor,
On the gray carpet littered
By cigarette ashes, lying next
To the podium; pencil in hand,
Lined paper in my lap.
Fluorescent light drowning me,
Shadows dancing on the wall.
Hollow tissue box, contents
Strewn across the room;
Eyes closed forever.
This is the last poem,
The last goodbye.
-The Raven-
Copyright ©
TheRaven
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2005-01-09 19:10:11]
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Re: Goodbye
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by Kalika on
Sunday, 9th January 2005 @ 08:13:03 PM AEST
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However little thought you feel you put in to this it certianly drew a lot from me.
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Re: Goodbye
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by TaintedSoul on
Monday, 10th January 2005 @ 07:06:51 AM AEST
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That disconnected feeling one gets when they see no end to the darkness in life seeps through the words here.
peace
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Re: Goodbye
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by afterdark on
Saturday, 29th January 2005 @ 04:30:56 PM AEST
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| Awesome write.. |
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