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Why?
Contributed by
jac
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Wednesday, 4th December 2002 @ 04:30:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
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Why?
Die,die,die another day
Bleed,bleed,bleed another way
Die,die,die another day
Dead,dead,dead again today
Rot,rot,rot away today
Why,why,why not another way
Die,die,die another day
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2002-12-04 04:30:00]
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Re: Why?
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by OreO on
Wednesday, 4th December 2002 @ 10:32:14 PM AEST
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Well hmm.....this is definately different....it has a style of it's own, thanks for sharing it....
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Re: Why?
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by jac on
Monday, 9th December 2002 @ 03:35:22 PM AEST
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| this is jac. i just wrote another poem caled perpetual. thanks for the review. |
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Re: Why?
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by tinka_belle on
Saturday, 28th June 2003 @ 02:15:44 AM AEST
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nice style
why?
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