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The Dutiful Serial Killer
Contributed by
darkplaidbabe
on
Sunday, 9th January 2005 @ 05:38:58 PM in AEST
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He smiles while she’s dying
Watches her eyes go dark
Thinks he’s doing her a favor
Feeding a hungry shark
They cry as she lies so still
Placed by experienced hands
So sadly run-of-the mill
So greatly in demand
She watches from the heavens
As he takes another one down
Again to bond and sever
Again to break and drown
Another bed is vacant
A funeral in the pouring rain
Another life is taken
A death filled with suffering, pain
Another family mourns
As their child is buried before her time
Another heart is torn
As he opens another bottle of wine
He doesn’t understand his sins
He only wants to get revenge
For what his mother did
To him before they buried her in that trench
When they beg him for their lives
With their dying breaths
He hears her words, like throwing knives
And revels in “her” death
He leaves them there to rot
Like he would have done to her
If only she had simply got
Exactly what she had deserved
In his mind its only right
That he get justice for his sorrowful life
By stopping their hearts at night
By murdering them to relieve his strife
And when he grips them in his hands
And the tears stream down their faces
As he carries out his demented plans
He sees small semblance traces
Of her and her maternal heartlessness
And when its done…. he feels he can rest
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Re: The Dutiful Serial Killer
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by afterdark on
Sunday, 9th January 2005 @ 05:42:37 PM AEST
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| Good strong write.. |
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Re: The Dutiful Serial Killer
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by AllSmiles on
Sunday, 9th January 2005 @ 06:19:47 PM AEST
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| Nice poem. The thoughts and emotion of the serial killer are great. |
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Re: The Dutiful Serial Killer
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by Scarlett on
Tuesday, 11th January 2005 @ 04:53:30 AM AEST
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this was really good, must've been hard to explain a serial killer's mentality so well in rhyme!
very impressed, a pleasure to read x |
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Re: The Dutiful Serial Killer
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by Essentially9 on
Friday, 27th May 2005 @ 09:22:24 PM AEST
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| amazing talent. |
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Re: The Dutiful Serial Killer
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by secretwind on
Tuesday, 31st May 2005 @ 09:12:11 PM AEST
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A dark power in this is scary
Interesting |
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