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what if?
Contributed by
Chooky
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Sunday, 9th January 2005 @ 03:40:44 PM in AEST
Topic:
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What if i could love so that i moved stars
what if was was preety boys would chase after me
what if he loved me when i loved him
what if i could live my life without feeling dim
what if i loved my life then knives wouldnt be an issue
what if i could live my life without saying what if?
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Re: what if?
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 9th January 2005 @ 03:43:15 PM AEST
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| A sad but good write. |
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Re: what if?
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by afterdark on
Sunday, 9th January 2005 @ 03:56:03 PM AEST
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Here is a field day..Spell check.."was was preety"??wtf does that mean?
What if you could write a good poem?
What if you could simply learn to spell?
What if you could stop wanting "pretty" boys(wtf again)?
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Re: what if?
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by devine_xox on
Sunday, 9th January 2005 @ 04:02:38 PM AEST
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| I understand what you are trying to say here and it’s sad. Because you are a new member just letting you know that before you post your poem there is a spell check just in case you are not sure of any words. Don’t be upset that someone has posted a rude comment. They are attacking you and this website does not condone that behavior. So continue on writing poetry don’t be discouraged by rudeness. xoxox |
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Re: what if?
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by ladyfawn on
Sunday, 9th January 2005 @ 04:08:02 PM AEST
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great opening line, a heartfelt write, warm welcome to ypdc:) hugs n' love nessa
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Re: what if?
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by reprobate on
Sunday, 9th January 2005 @ 04:39:42 PM AEST
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you're on your way
grey but still good
thanks for sharing |
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Re: what if?
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by jjones12 on
Sunday, 9th January 2005 @ 04:43:00 PM AEST
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| Don't listen to "afterdark" that was a great poem |
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