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Longing
Contributed by
Irish_Flame
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Sunday, 9th January 2005 @ 02:25:33 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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I have this longing in my heart
But I don't know what it is and nothing sems to slake it.
You've been such a good fiend to me.
But I think that more could be found.
You have my heart, please don't break it.
Everytime I talk to you
It makes me smile.
And when we say good-bye
I know it's only for a little while.
I know how I really feel.
But I can barely let myself believe that it's real...
How can I tell you?
All I can say is...
You have my heart,
please don't break it...
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Irish_Flame
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2005-01-09 14:25:33]
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Re: Longing
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by O7NeVeS on
Sunday, 9th January 2005 @ 02:57:13 PM AEST
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| very heartfelt, i can relate. keep writing! TD |
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Re: Longing
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 9th January 2005 @ 03:22:01 PM AEST
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This is a great write.
Wonderful job! |
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Re: Longing
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by autumngreeneyes on
Sunday, 9th January 2005 @ 05:45:48 PM AEST
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| Exactly how I feel.. thanks for commenting on my poetry btw.. |
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