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When I Cry
Contributed by
devine_xox
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Sunday, 9th January 2005 @ 01:19:20 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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There was a time I stopped believing
I’d see you no more
Every time that I’m sleeping
I feel you in my soul
If I could dream id dream forever
Just lay me down to sleep
When I’m dreaming I see you
I see you watching me
I wake to see the sunlight
And everything is so clear
Nothing is what it seems
Why did it seem so real?
When I cry I cry a river
And nobody else does knows
But me and all my heartache
Is this the end of our road?
But ill dream of all the moments
You and I did share
You were lover you were best friend
But now your not here
When I cry I cry a river
And nobody else does know
All I’ve got is just a memory
Of you for now I know
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devine_xox
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2005-01-09 13:19:20]
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Re: When I Cry
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by pixie on
Sunday, 9th January 2005 @ 01:34:30 PM AEST
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awww that was so sweet and moving,
pixie xx |
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Re: When I Cry
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by lostlady38 on
Sunday, 9th January 2005 @ 01:48:33 PM AEST
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| very good. you can feel the tears about to fall. i like this. |
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Re: When I Cry
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by O7NeVeS on
Sunday, 9th January 2005 @ 03:02:43 PM AEST
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| very heartfelt...i like it. TD |
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Re: When I Cry
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 9th January 2005 @ 03:30:52 PM AEST
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| So much emotion in this write. It's great! |
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Re: When I Cry
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by ladyfawn on
Sunday, 9th January 2005 @ 04:15:40 PM AEST
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excellent writing, hugs n' love nessa
@->>->:- |
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