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Alive At Thirty-Five
Contributed by
Evilnn
on
Sunday, 9th January 2005 @ 12:29:41 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Thirty-five and barely alive
Life seems to have no meaning
So I just keep on dreaming
Wonder what it's all about
Always filled with so much doubt
Why must I live with so much fear
Always brings another tear
Don't know why I even bother
Once again you betray my honor
Is there really anyone out there you can really trust?
Is it really true love or is it just lust?
Everything makes you wonder
Can you ever feel secure?
You want to live happily ever after
But all he really wanted was her...
All of this can make you feel so ill...
Well, what the hell, just take another pill....
Copyright ©
Evilnn
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2005-01-09 12:29:41]
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Re: Alive At Thirty-Five
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by afterdark on
Sunday, 9th January 2005 @ 12:31:50 PM AEST
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| When you feel the need to struggle and all is not well..Keep writing poetry..Good or bad it will help |
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Re: Alive At Thirty-Five
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by Ravensfire on
Sunday, 9th January 2005 @ 12:41:38 PM AEST
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| I really liked this one, maybe because been there done that. poetry enables you to get things off your chest, have hope, ty. |
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Re: Alive At Thirty-Five
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by Kalika on
Sunday, 9th January 2005 @ 01:14:45 PM AEST
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very nice used to feel like this all the time, so I gave up hope. finally got the courage to have it again and I'm sure you will too.
Kali |
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