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Regrets
Contributed by
breny
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Sunday, 9th January 2005 @ 12:01:43 PM in AEST
Topic:
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you touched me badly
this I knew
yet I didn't know
you touched other girls too
I was sitting in English
bored out of my mind
when the girl in front of me
put a note in my hand
I read it once
then read it through again
I didn't believe it
how stupid I've been
as I wrote her back
I had tears in my eyes
He told me he'd stop
and I believed his lies
I told her I was sorry
for what he put her through
but little did I know
he touched her sister too
she told me the stories
she heard from her dad
her mother had told him
the things my uncle did
why didn't I tell
anyone that I knew
I kept it a secret
no one had a clue
I was foolish to think
it stopped with me
when I knew the kind of man
my uncle could be
so now I regret
keeping it to myself
I put all those thoughts
in a box on the shelf
I could have spared two more people
the pain that I had to deal with
I could have turned him in
and in jail he'd be delt with
Copyright ©
breny
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2005-01-09 12:01:43]
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Re: Regrets
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by JD_Hamilton on
Sunday, 9th January 2005 @ 02:33:59 PM AEST
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| Wow, thats a very heart felt poem, excellent writing, you are very brave to share that. Most people I know would never have been willing to share that. Keep writing and thanks for the comment on "The Grid Iron". |
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Re: Regrets
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by O7NeVeS on
Sunday, 9th January 2005 @ 03:06:03 PM AEST
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| this is a very heartfelt poem. i'm sorry what had happened but it's good that u can now write about it and express yourself. It was a good write! TD |
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Re: Regrets
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 11th January 2005 @ 05:57:32 PM AEST
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Indeed, I echo Jarred's comment.
Very strong write.
Keep writing. |
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Re: Regrets
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by cottoncandy on
Saturday, 22nd January 2005 @ 07:18:05 PM AEST
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Damn, I'm speechless...very powerful..I have a lot of respect for you...don't know what i would have done in your place.. god bless
Diana |
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