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Please
Contributed by
BuggY
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Sunday, 9th January 2005 @ 09:13:02 AM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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Please God, Give me the strength,
To have what it takes to carry on,
Why am I still going to such a length?!
When I know deep down my soul has gone...
God, what did I do that was so bad to deserve this?!
Why isn’t everything I do... perfect?!
Why do I have to put up with such crap?!
Lord can you just open up a little... gap
For me...
To Squeeze
Through...
Please?!!
I guess this is a kind of plead,
I am sick and tired of them watching me bleed!
I guess I will have to succeed,
I have so much more things to complete,
I swear I’m not trying to compete...
I don’t deserve this,
I am always in S**t,
No matter what I do,
I have GOT TO pull through,
So PLEASE God, Give me the strength, that I need to carry on!!!
Copyright ©
BuggY
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2005-01-09 09:13:02]
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Re: Please
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by afterdark on
Sunday, 9th January 2005 @ 09:18:41 AM AEST
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I can tell you wrote it after 1 am
Not bad really..Spell check I seem to keep telling ppl really works..It kind of drains away in some places..Other then all that good stuff..Not bad. |
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Re: Please
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by Mesano on
Tuesday, 1st February 2005 @ 04:12:43 PM AEST
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very deep buggy... well written, but yes i agree it may have come out a bit better if you werent half asleep lol... keep it up
love always,
mexy |
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