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KISS
Contributed by
PixieLovezChrisSchwoerer
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Sunday, 9th January 2005 @ 07:27:58 AM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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KISS ME NOW,
SOFTLY,
GENTLY.
KISS ME NOW,
ROUGHLY,
WILDLY.
KISS ME NOW,
BEFORE I KISS ANOTHER.
TAKE ME NOW,
BEFORE I TAKE ANOTHER.
KISS ME NOW,
BEFORE I AM GONE.
VANISHED,
BANISHED.
KISS ME NOW.
Copyright ©
PixieLovezChrisSchwoerer
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2005-01-09 07:27:58]
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Re: KISS
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by pixie on
Sunday, 9th January 2005 @ 07:29:33 AM AEST
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short but good poem, like this one
pixie xx |
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Re: KISS
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by oxluvlaughingxo on
Sunday, 9th January 2005 @ 01:14:10 PM AEST
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| short but cute. i like it. |
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Re: KISS
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 9th January 2005 @ 01:37:48 PM AEST
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Somehow 'banished' doesn't work for me in the way I think you wrote it, since you are alluding to your own free will in moving away from said object of your affection, this line
"BEFORE I TAKE ANOTHER."
And 'banished' doesn't work - unless you are referring to the object, and not yourself . . .
Interesting from that perspective, but somehow I think I read too much into this and give this poem too much credit. I will check out some of your other poems to find out how wrong or right I am in future.
Welcome to YDPC. |
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Re: KISS
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by devine_xox on
Sunday, 9th January 2005 @ 02:42:03 PM AEST
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| lol, im sorry i thought it was funny. |
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Re: KISS
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by O7NeVeS on
Sunday, 9th January 2005 @ 03:13:33 PM AEST
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| i think it's cute. TD |
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Re: KISS
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by reprobate on
Sunday, 9th January 2005 @ 05:12:29 PM AEST
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agreeing with neptune about 'banished' but i like the feeling of urgency portrayed
thanks for sharing |
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