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When I look.
Contributed by
Sk8ergrl_911
on
Sunday, 9th January 2005 @ 06:32:59 AM in AEST
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MiscPoems
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I look around, silence.
I look at your picture, beauty.
I look at your children, grace.
I look at your murder, horror.
I look at your grave, murder.
I look at your love, perfect.
I look at you, an angel.
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Re: When I look.
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by afterdark on
Sunday, 9th January 2005 @ 06:39:44 AM AEST
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| vERY DIFFRENT..iT had me a bit lost in area's.. |
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Re: When I look.
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by dreaming-of-your-love on
Sunday, 9th January 2005 @ 06:44:40 AM AEST
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that was relly good it was relly out there and open sorrry if you dont know me but my name is
stephanie
good job!!! |
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Re: When I look.
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by Sk8ergrl_911 on
Sunday, 9th January 2005 @ 12:18:02 PM AEST
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| Thank you, and please keep em coming |
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Re: When I look.
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by autumngreeneyes on
Sunday, 9th January 2005 @ 12:33:42 PM AEST
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| It left me wondering who you were talking about..I was wondering if it was the Peterson woman..? but it made me at least think which is at least more than most of the poetry here.. |
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Re: When I look.
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by Sk8ergrl_911 on
Monday, 17th January 2005 @ 02:08:07 PM AEST
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| Actually, I just wrote it , didn't really have any inspiration, just wrote it, but thank you |
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Re: When I look.
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by Trisha on
Monday, 17th January 2005 @ 09:09:11 PM AEST
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wow this is good
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