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forbidden mountains
Contributed by
iodinelove
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Sunday, 9th January 2005 @ 02:26:59 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Remembering her
the sting of her tears
coupled above the silohuettes
of crumbling, forbidden mountains
(not even they could attain her depth)
the black, felt river of her hair
hiding the poetry of her fear
the poetry of beautiful brown eyes
that could not look away.
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iodinelove
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2005-01-09 02:26:59]
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Re: forbidden mountains
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by pUnKa_RaCh on
Sunday, 9th January 2005 @ 02:54:49 AM AEST
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| i like this.....just because its short doesnt stop the power...its great . well done |
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Re: forbidden mountains
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by afterdark on
Sunday, 9th January 2005 @ 08:25:53 PM AEST
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| This one I liked. |
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Re: forbidden mountains
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by ladyfawn on
Sunday, 9th January 2005 @ 08:30:45 PM AEST
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great write:) hugs n' love nessa
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