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a grandmothers honesty
Contributed by
brokenwings
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Sunday, 9th January 2005 @ 01:57:24 AM in AEST
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you were always honest with me
pushed me to do better in life,
told me not to give my gift
till he made me his wife,
i should have taken all of your advise,
now i'm left in such a vice,
I know you meant the best when you were hard,
I know you saw me for more than we all thought
you were my only truth,
and i miss you,
and i promise to come more,
cuz had it not been for you,
i wouldn't be here now...
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2005-01-09 01:57:24]
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Re: a grandmothers honesty
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 9th January 2005 @ 02:09:13 AM AEST
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| Sweet write. :-) |
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Re: a grandmothers honesty
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by afterdark on
Sunday, 9th January 2005 @ 11:46:35 AM AEST
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| A very heartfelt write.. |
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