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my confidence or the lack there of
Contributed by
athena
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Saturday, 8th January 2005 @ 09:33:10 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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Somethings eating me up inside
Something from which I cannot hide
A black hole destroying me
It wont stop for all my misery
Day by day it takes my life
Gives me pain gives me strife
What is this awful thing you ask?
Is it forever will it pass?
I will say it once and never repete
Low self confidence does this to me
Your just a teen you all go through this
But from this statment i must resist
This pain is so real
Surly everyone cannot feel.
A struggle to feel proud
Of what i do and who i am
To know the real me not another man
But when i look at myself i feel ashamed
Ugly twisted distorted and mamed
From this awful deisese some go through
This is all i had to say,
now im through.
Copyright ©
athena
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2005-01-08 21:33:10]
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Re: my confidence or the lack there of
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by afterdark on
Saturday, 8th January 2005 @ 09:35:32 PM AEST
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| Please comment please comment please please..There is your lack of confidence |
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Re: my confidence or the lack there of
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by autumngreeneyes on
Saturday, 8th January 2005 @ 09:42:19 PM AEST
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| afterdark is a smartass..lol.. work on your spelling and punctution.. but the idea and poetry is good.. |
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Re: my confidence or the lack there of
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by Puppy_dog_eyes on
Thursday, 28th April 2005 @ 04:47:47 PM AEST
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I know how you feel, I've suffered from lack of self confidence all my life.We learn to deal with things.
Keep writing, don't let anyone put you off.Write for yourself and you can't go wrong !!
Steve |
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