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The End of the Road
Contributed by
CurtisC
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Saturday, 8th January 2005 @ 08:45:39 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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I hope you don't foget about me,
I know I'll never forget you.
Years from now who knows where we'll be,
we don't have the slightest clue.
I'm glad I knew you these last few years,
you gave my heart something to hold on to.
Seeing you leave eclipses all my fears,
I can't imagine my life without you.
I doubt I'll ever see you again,
so this is probably goodbye.
My heart hopes that's not the case,
just the thought makes me cry.
I'll remember you forever, your smile,
and of course your precious face.
Copyright ©
CurtisC
... [
2005-01-08 20:45:39]
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Re: The End of the Road
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by breny on
Saturday, 8th January 2005 @ 08:53:11 PM AEST
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| oh how terribly sad! the people you love seem to move a lot don't they? thats the way it is for me |
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Re: The End of the Road
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by afterdark on
Saturday, 8th January 2005 @ 08:55:25 PM AEST
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| Just so awful..War in IRaq,,poverty,drug abuse with school childre,rape of women,abuse of women,And this is is sad??Gimme a break |
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Re: The End of the Road
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by O7NeVeS on
Saturday, 8th January 2005 @ 08:55:43 PM AEST
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| Such a depressing poem...but she's only moving, i'm sure that u guys can keep in touch and visit each other??...good luck! TD |
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Re: The End of the Road
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by ViktorMorgan on
Saturday, 8th January 2005 @ 09:15:16 PM AEST
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| I know its sad but you'll get over it... or you could tell her how you feel before she leaves. and you kinda settled your ending short on the poem didn't you? |
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Re: The End of the Road
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 9th January 2005 @ 01:30:00 AM AEST
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This is such a sad, but beautiful write.
I really hope you guys keep in touch. |
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