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Rabies
Contributed by
upomik
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Saturday, 8th January 2005 @ 08:27:37 PM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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In my mind, I'm going crazy
And I don't know how do deal
Someone's cut me with an invisible knife
Now I'm numb and cannot feel
I can't concentrate and I can't think
My sweat comes down in a pour
Tears spring to my eyes with every blink
I slowly sink to the floor
I lay on the floor panting and shivering
Lacking the strength to cry for aid
I closed my eyes and try to calm down
But still the shadows refuse to fade
Copyright ©
upomik
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2005-01-08 20:27:37]
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Re: Rabies
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by punkhead13 on
Saturday, 8th January 2005 @ 08:30:56 PM AEST
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| wow, i can relate to this . I like it. |
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Re: Rabies
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by afterdark on
Saturday, 8th January 2005 @ 08:31:37 PM AEST
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| Take a xanex |
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Re: Rabies
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by Essentially9 on
Saturday, 8th January 2005 @ 08:45:13 PM AEST
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| i liked this one a lot. i loved the last stanza especially. this is a nice show of your talent. |
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Re: Rabies
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by greeneyes on
Saturday, 8th January 2005 @ 09:04:11 PM AEST
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Ouch. You've captured the feelings of reality. Great write.
Nancy |
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