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Manny & the Marines
Contributed by
O7NeVeS
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Saturday, 8th January 2005 @ 08:14:34 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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I told you I love you, you told me you didn’t
You said you were leaving, and that was your reason
I want you to stay, but I want you to go
I want to have you my way, but I want you to grow
So you’re leaving in January, off to the marines
Stuck on a ship, packed like sardines
I hope you remember me, and dream of me at night
Cuz I’m crazy about you, you’re on my mind both day and night
You’re blind to see, how you’re torturing me
So I’m gonna let you go, and be whom you must be
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O7NeVeS
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2005-01-08 20:14:34]
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Re: Manny & the Marines
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by jjones12 on
Saturday, 8th January 2005 @ 08:20:47 PM AEST
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| Good,kinda sad |
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Re: Manny & the Marines
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 8th January 2005 @ 08:24:18 PM AEST
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how depressing !
My Sister is in the army and she came back safe and sound from iraq, |
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Re: Manny & the Marines
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by breny on
Saturday, 8th January 2005 @ 08:36:50 PM AEST
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| its sad that he had to go to Iraq but at least you were understanding enough to know why he had to go. Great poem |
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Re: Manny & the Marines
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by Dec2three198five on
Sunday, 9th January 2005 @ 03:04:35 AM AEST
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| Is this Manny the one from Bryant? One of my teammate for a year in Bryant? I hope he gets back here safe and well. |
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Re: Manny & the Marines
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by CurtisC on
Friday, 4th March 2005 @ 01:48:00 AM AEST
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i hope he gets back here safe, i know i wouldn't wanna be sent of anywhere under bush's command :) great job with this one, i really like the packed like sardines line :)
Curtis |
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