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Your stalker (my love)
Contributed by
breny
on
Saturday, 8th January 2005 @ 06:04:12 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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you can't escape it
even if you try
it will be with you always
you can't ever say goodbye
its in the bathroom with you
it sleeps with you at night
it goes with you to work
it's useless for you to fight
it's your personal stalker
following you every where
however you can't see it
it can be anywhere
Copyright ©
breny
... [
2005-01-08 18:04:12]
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Re: Your stalker (my love)
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by eyesxcriedxout1989 on
Saturday, 8th January 2005 @ 07:12:51 PM AEST
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This is good...I thought it was okay how it is...but I it'd be cool for the last line to read something like "and it is me"...if you are the stalker or something...I might not have gotten the jist of it...good though
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Re: Your stalker (my love)
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by O7NeVeS on
Saturday, 8th January 2005 @ 08:50:44 PM AEST
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| I think this poem if good just the way it is. TD |
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Re: Your stalker (my love)
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by DorianChambers on
Sunday, 9th January 2005 @ 09:51:18 AM AEST
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very nice poem like how it leads up 2 the conclussion, well done breny . . .
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Re: Your stalker (my love)
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by JD_Hamilton on
Sunday, 9th January 2005 @ 07:18:22 PM AEST
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| Hey Breny...Keep writing...You So Rock....I love it the way it is.....I often feel that same way |
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