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I'm sorry David
Contributed by
Suzume_B
on
Saturday, 8th January 2005 @ 05:11:22 PM in AEST
Topic:
ApologyPoetry
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My perfect love, my perfect friend
You meant the world to me, we never planned to end.
To that perfect heart I caused so much pain
What words can I say.
Can you ever forgive my evil ways?
My love for you was always true.
I hope we can move on and start anew.
Will you ever love and trust me again
Or did that one mistake mark the end?
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2005-01-08 17:11:22]
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Re: I'm sorry David
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by eyesxcriedxout1989 on
Saturday, 8th January 2005 @ 05:47:59 PM AEST
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You don't suck as a poet...this is really good...really good emotional write
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Re: I'm sorry David
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by afterdark on
Saturday, 8th January 2005 @ 05:48:56 PM AEST
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| Not really sure what this whole thing was for..I mean I get the poem but there is lack of real feeling here..Just something I picked up on..You should not have to beg someone to care or love you.. |
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Re: I'm sorry David
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 29th September 2008 @ 11:00:08 AM AEST
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| You do not suck as a poet!!!!!! This was a really nice poem for I can really sense the remorse here. If this David is half decent, he would forgive you. Again, excellent poem! |
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