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''LAND OF TEARS AND SORROW''
Contributed by
ravensfire
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Saturday, 8th January 2005 @ 03:51:40 PM in AEST
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EmotionalPoetry
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One day I took a walk through the land of tears and sorrow, I thought to myself maybe this could end on the morrow. I thought life is full of pain and joy our hearts are not toys. My feeling of loneliness is not just for me, In other hearts I also can see. My heart my soul I want to give, Its for these gifts I want to live. It's no fun living in the land of tears and sorrow, Is there no heart that I could borrow ?
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Re: ''LAND OF TEARS AND SORROW''
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by afterdark on
Saturday, 8th January 2005 @ 03:55:06 PM AEST
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| Thank you for not going on and on..This was very short but this was also very good too.. |
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Re: ''LAND OF TEARS AND SORROW''
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by kidpoet_213 on
Saturday, 8th January 2005 @ 10:15:18 PM AEST
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I like ur poem... but for me... it's hard to read in the paragraph style in which u've wrote... and there is some punctuation errors... but other than that I like it...
It does show a lot of depressing emotions... that are expressed well... Good job!
~Donna~ |
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