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Expectation
Contributed by
essentially9
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Saturday, 8th January 2005 @ 02:32:13 PM in AEST
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Expectation
I don't know if I can keep
Up with expectation
Or if I'm lost too deep
In this lack of inspiration
I've been on this pedistool
And I've fallen off before
Placed there till I fell a fool
And lay broken on the floor
I've gotten up to be placed
On it once again
And I feel I must save face
Or lose it all to pain
Staying is my motivation
Even with lack of inspiration
Showing my creations
Not holding up to my expectation
Copyright ©
essentially9
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2005-01-08 14:32:13]
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Re: Expectation
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by Stitch on
Saturday, 8th January 2005 @ 02:40:37 PM AEST
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I've had these moments. Yep, but you got something on paper, didn't you.
LOVE your spelling of pedestal!
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Re: Expectation
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by Ravensfire on
Saturday, 8th January 2005 @ 02:41:45 PM AEST
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| seems people expect more than you can give or willing to give, then when you've given all you can, they want more. very well written, ty. |
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Re: Expectation
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by afterdark on
Saturday, 8th January 2005 @ 02:42:48 PM AEST
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| Very well done..Another amazing job. |
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Re: Expectation
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by autumngreeneyes on
Saturday, 8th January 2005 @ 02:53:40 PM AEST
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| Yes indeedy..stay on that stool.. and maybe it's the kind that spins????? |
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Re: Expectation
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by Spazzo on
Saturday, 8th January 2005 @ 03:53:16 PM AEST
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Awesome poem. I can relate to this.
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Re: Expectation
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by mina-1 on
Saturday, 8th January 2005 @ 10:34:44 PM AEST
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great write, well done i really enjoy reading your poetry keep it up
luv,
sue |
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Re: Expectation
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by subchild on
Sunday, 9th January 2005 @ 05:51:34 AM AEST
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| I loved this poem..You really know how to get my attention and keep it. |
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Re: Expectation
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by PumpkinPie on
Tuesday, 11th January 2005 @ 11:34:40 PM AEST
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Written with grace,and you captured very well the way society expects each and every one of us to be---the best,even though it might not be always the best for us.Great write.
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